Merry Christmas, my dear readers!
I hope you have a wonderful Christmas with your loved ones. I'll be spending the holiday with my parents and sister. Before we get to the gift-exchange portion of the celebration, we'll be reading the Christmas story about Jesus coming to earth in order to save our souls. This is my favorite part of Christmas.
Here's a short story for you to enjoy. It was inspired by YOU, my sweet readers, who participated in this contest.
Note: This short story made the finals of a contest. Further details below the story.
Copyright 2018 by Andrea Renee Cox. All rights reserved.
I hope you have a wonderful Christmas with your loved ones. I'll be spending the holiday with my parents and sister. Before we get to the gift-exchange portion of the celebration, we'll be reading the Christmas story about Jesus coming to earth in order to save our souls. This is my favorite part of Christmas.
Here's a short story for you to enjoy. It was inspired by YOU, my sweet readers, who participated in this contest.
Note: This short story made the finals of a contest. Further details below the story.
Copyright 2018 by Andrea Renee Cox. All rights reserved.
The Border Between
by Andrea Renee Cox
inspired by Kellyn Roth (and her brother James)
The cityscape puttered by the window. Helene Jackson checked
her diamond-studded watch and tapped a single knuckle on the glass partition
between the cab driver and herself.
The dark-skinned man glanced over
his shoulder and gave her a smile of crooked but gleaming-white teeth.
“Can you hurry up a bit? I’ve got
somewhere to be.”
He cracked the partition open a
couple of inches. “Do you need more air? The air condition is broke. I’m so
sorry. I think the heater work.”
Helene picked a speck of dust from
her slacks and looked down her nose at the driver. “I need you to find the gas pedal.” She adjusted her handbag from one
thigh to the other. “Whoever thought to use the heater on a seventy-degree day,
anyway?”
“Are you happy for Christmas?” He
gave her another smile, this time accompanying it with a bobble head-style nod,
before looking back at the city street before him.
“Not particularly.”
“My little girl, she is so happy
this morning. She tells me, ‘Papa, you bring much happy to passenger today.’ I
tell her I will try.” A chuckle bounced across the space between them.
“I didn’t ask for a commentary,
only a ride.”
“No worry, lady. Conversation is
free.” He clicked on his blinker and moved into a new lane, then looked over
his left shoulder to check for traffic.
She gasped and clutched her bag to
her stomach. “Don’t you check first?”
“Why? I haven’t hit nothing yet.”
“Where are you from, the darkest
part of Africa? Doesn't the taxi company check for a license before they let you loose?”
“No, no. I’m from a port city in
Gabon—”
“Just drive. And speed up!”
“What is hurry?” He turned a
concerned look to her in the rearview mirror, which wasn’t positioned
correctly. It was cockeyed and seemed to be barely hanging on to the
windshield. “You need relax. Enjoy this happy Christmas.”
“What’s so happy about Christmas
this year? Or any year, for that matter. It’s just another business day for me.”
She watched another three skyscrapers pass by. It seemed there was something
missing in this day. But then, it’d felt that way for years. Ever since…
She didn’t want to think about that.
“You know…”
She tuned back into the driver’s
monologue.
“… my birthday sad one time.”
“Only one?”
The driver continued as if he hadn’t
heard her mumbled inquiry. “I go to boat, try to see whale. For three days, we
hear there whale in bay. I go; no whale.”
Why was the guy carrying on a
conversation with her? She’d given him every indication that she just wanted to
make it to her destination as quickly as possible. Certainly she didn’t see any
point in listening to his misadventure stories.
“I come home to my little girl.” He
pulled his hand downward in front of his face. “She sad when I tell her I see
no whale. She wait all day for me to come home and tell her about big whale.
But… no story. So, I take out wood and knife, and I carve while I tell her
story of a whale that swallowed a man who didn’t do what God ask him.”
Helene scooted over so she could
better see the taxi driver’s profile. How long had it been since she’d slowed
down long enough to truly connect with someone? To hear their stories, see
their expressions, to listen to their hearts? Had she really lost touch with
humans in her mad dash toward retirement funds and vacation homes? How long had
she neglected her own faith, thinking that monetary things were so much more
important? They paled next to eternal hope. How had she allowed herself to
forget that?
“Did your little girl enjoy the
story?”
He smiled at her. “Oh, yes. She
always like my stories from Bible-book. When I finish, I give her carving of
whale. She smile big then. Her happy make my birthday happy.” He patted his
chest. “Make my heart happy.”
Helene settled back against the
seat and listened to the traffic buzz by. For several blocks, she took notice
of the Christmas decorations in office building windows and outdoor holiday
items that added a dose of cheer to the atmosphere of the city she called home.
Had she ever noticed how festive things got around here? Why hadn’t she looked
deeper, into her own heart to see what she was missing? This man had definitely
found it, holding fast to his faith even when life disappointed him. She wished
she could figure out how to again live out her faith as this man clearly was
doing.
Finally, the car stopped. She
blinked and looked out the other window at the building that housed her corner
office. She could step out of the taxicab, walk into the building, take an
elevator up seventy floors, and inhale the amazing view from her windows in a
quick gulp before getting down to the business of crunching numbers and making
blueprints make sense for a few clients. Somehow, though, that just didn’t
sound like a good idea anymore. Not today, anyway.
“Is the price no good? I take five
dollar off. Holiday special.”
Helene shook her head, giving
herself a hefty mental jolt. “No… no.” She gave a small smile—the best she
could do on a rusty memory of the action—to the chatty driver. “What’s your
name?”
“American no say right. You call me
Fred.”
“All right. Fred, do you have plans
to spend time with your little girl today? For Christmas, I mean.”
“She wait at home for me. I work
today, like you.”
A car honked behind them and eventually switched lanes and went around. Fred and Helene looked at each other. Neither
said anything for a while, but their compassionate blinks carried on a wordless
conversation.
Something like hope or fresh life
sparked into Helene’s heart. It might have felt like middle-ish spring, sorta
summer outside the cab, but suddenly it felt exactly as heartwarming as her
childhood Christmases inside it. Fred’s little girl might have asked him to
give his passengers a happy Christmas—and he was definitely succeeding with
Helene—but she wondered if she could return the favor. Would he accept her
offer? It was a risk she’d have to take.
“Fred?”
“Yes, lady. You no want go here
now?”
She shook her head. “If I give you
a full day’s pay, would you let me… I probably shouldn’t even ask, but… May I
share Christmas with your little girl and you?”
He stared at her for at least
thirty or forty seconds. Then, a brilliant smile overtook his entire face. “My
little girl be made happy. Happy
happy.”
Helene pulled out her checkbook and
wrote a check for a larger sum than probably three days’ taxi fare. Since Fred
had renewed her perspective on life, she felt she owed him much more than what
this slip of paper would provide.
As she handed it over to him, she
posed another question. “Would you consider a change in employers?”
After he moved his mouth like a
guppy at the number on the paper between his fingers, he peered at her with
wide eyes.
“I could really use a chauffeur.
Not all the taxi drivers are as friendly as you, and I would be glad to discuss
starting a college fund for your daughter.”
“Oh, lady…”
“Helene.”
“I no know what to say, Helene.”
“Unless you’d rather keep working
for the taxi company…”
Fred reached his hand into the
back, across the border between them—namely, the glass partition. But also, the
divide of ethnicity, class, and strength of faith. There might be many things
wedged there, but with her offer and his acceptance—they shook on it now—they
could build a bridge to span the distance. Perhaps they’d even be able to create
a friendship that would fill up more than just this one day, this single
Christmas. Maybe this would be the start of new happy memories to join those
childhood ones with her deceased parents, which she’d locked away for too many
years. Starting now, Helene Jackson fully intended to cherish each moment and
smile a whole lot more. Perhaps one of her New Year’s resolutions would be to
make her clients’ hearts happy, as Fred so quickly taught her this special
Christmas day.
~~~
Acknowledgements
Heavenly Father, You grant my heart such happiness. I am
thrilled to share that feeling with others through not only the stories you
have for me to tell, but also through my daily life. Thank You!
Kellyn (and her brother James), thank you for inspiring this
short story. I never know where story ideas will take me, but I have found such
joy in this little tale. Thank you for sparking this one with your creative
mish-mash of ideas.
My parents, thank you for teaching me to live out my faith.
~~~
Designed by Kellyn Roth |
I entered this short story in Kellyn Roth's 1k Contest. It was chosen to be nominated for the final round of competition! While it did not win a prize, it did receive some pretty high praise from Miss Roth... and she made a mock-up cover for it, which I adore and am including here. (You may find out who won the contest and see other mock-up covers in this article.)
Feedback from Miss Kellyn Roth:
Length: 1,397
Rating: 5/5
Review: I love this story! It’s well-written, yes, and not confusing, but it’s also meaningful. I mean, a lot of the stories were meaningful, but this story—and especially the ending—really appeals to me. I liked “Fred” a lot (he’s a very funny, sweet guy), and Helene was awesome, too, in a “I feel bad that she’s like she is” way.
~~~
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4 comments:
Andrea,
Everyone can use a little happiness. Great story! There's no better walk than your daily walk with Christ!
It has been a wonderful Christmas with my husband and two daughters. I am very blessed!
Thanks, Mom! I wholeheartedly agree. Love you. :)
Andrea,
Every one of your short stories I've read have been a real treat! They are so heart-felt and true to life.
Keep sharing your gift!
Thanks so much, Daddy! Your support encourages me.
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